Awesome poem.

Twilight Starr

i cant even breathe right now, its that good. i think you might just be my favourite poem kristie...and that takes alot

That was yet another one of your poems that I liked, because there was so much emotion put into it. Bravo!

Wow! So... Much...Misery! *cough Excuse my rudeness. Anyway,it's great that you can express yourself that way. A question comes to mind though... Um... Did this happen to you? Just asking. *laugh Don't take this too seriously. So It's really cool, you rock!

This.. actually made me feel very sad. I've never experienced anything like that, but I do know a man like that... and the idea of how fast such attitude is spreading is very frightening.

Nice poem. I like the way you express your feelings in your writing. SOme people amy think you're being emo, ignore them...you're jsut writing and it rocks because it stresses a ponit and then gvies details tob ack it up. Nice job. Way to go!