There would be one good word to describe this piece. Wow. So short and bittersweet. I loved it. I wish so severely I could give you advice, but I fear I can't. I saw that you had reviewed one of the works of my friend and saw that you had some tough criticism. Being so... um... brutally honest as some would say, is so respectful to me and I've been looking for someone to give me some constructive criticism on MY work, so if you would please, I would so appreciate your input on my stories/ poems. Thank you so much, and please, do take my compliments on this piece to heart.

~ i'm-not-emo-just-talented