Reading this poem, it makes me wonder what you were inspirated of. It was so depressing, and really made me see how you felt when you wrote it. I've felt that way myself too, and it's not nice, but tell me: Is this feeling caused by a certain person, or just a certain music from a certain band you listen to? That's how it was with me.
I hope to see more from you, and that you'll better soon.
The Reverse Edge Blade