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| PhsycoXchickX3 2008-03-29 ch 3,  | abusethis is really good! i remember you reading it to me on the phone, but by the middle of the chapter, you started calling lena, Cassidy. so you might want to fix that. that i found some other spelling errors, so just look it over. but other than that it's really good and i wanna know more every time i finish one chapter...that's why im staying up untill like 1:30 in the morning reading this. lol. becca |
| 2BadSoSad 2007-05-23 ch 2, | abuseWow, nice story. Do continue please! I want to know what happens next! lol. Keep going! |