She's a deranged murder with her victims severed heads in a box! Gasp, who would have known. Oh well, good chapter.

Cliffhangers are always cool. I love the wording in this. It sounds very lifelike, which is good, considering it's from a first person perspective. Keep up the good work!

Sounds really good so far! I have to admit, the chapters are pretty short, but I personally wouldn't advise elongating them too much. I really appreciate short chapters, since I don't get on FP to read that often. It makes it easier for me to read it.

looks good so far.

Good Chapter but a little more detail could help... I suppose Casey's a vampire... or a superhero, from the little I know about you.

Holy CRAP that's one short first chapter-slash-intro! But sounds pretty good thus far.

So it's Sci-fi/supernatural, eh? Sounds like MY story. Well... I'm pretty sure Casey isn't a superpowered superhuman from another galaxy living in the middle of a new holucaust...

Sounds like my life... But it's good so far.