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Everything to you 2007-09-18 . chapter 1
Hm interesting. I'm a little confused, is she getting married?? Or is she just wearing white. Or is it both?
poetic abortion 2007-05-16 . chapter 1


The last line.

And:

"if white is the color of innocence,
then why am I wearing it?"

So pretty.

- Noelle
Her Wishing Well 2007-05-16 . chapter 1
I loved this. I like the confliction in it, and the last line. Great work.
Sercus Kaynine 2007-05-15 . chapter 1
This seemed to give me shivers...

Nice flow, and great job with the metaphors!
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