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Reviews For:
innocence
Everything to you
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
Hm interesting. I'm a little confused, is she getting married?? Or is she just wearing white. Or is it both?
poetic abortion
2007-05-16 . chapter 1
♥
The last line.
And:
"if white is the color of innocence,
then why am I wearing it?"
So pretty.
- Noelle
Her Wishing Well
2007-05-16 . chapter 1
I loved this. I like the confliction in it, and the last line. Great work.
Sercus Kaynine
2007-05-15 . chapter 1
This seemed to give me shivers...
Nice flow, and great job with the metaphors!
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