I enjoyed reading this piece. It was really interesting, and really quite sad in ways. I like the way you seem to think outside the box in your plot ideas, and write in a way I've not come accross before. It's really great.

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This was pretty anticlimactic.

What a sad relationship... if you can call it one.

. . . ;_; How tragic...

It was a bit confusing with the 'he's but I still got it.

Damn. Why'd he do that?

Short, but interesting. I kinda get what happened...sorta...hee.

Oh, geez... That sucks.

was that the end? really depressing, but still loved it.

Is that it? He moves away and Micah doesn't see him again?

Did Micah just murder him?

this is so tragically beautiful. i love it.

Very tragic relationship.

Aw, it's sad again :( Why did Micah treat him like that?

Oh they meet again! I bet Micah is wrong >:D

Ouch, cold.

What an odd relationship they seem to have. I wonder where this is leading?

Well...at least he has a bit more money...