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| Lilias 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseI enjoyed it! The last line was priceless. Thanks for sharing. :) |
| PretzelSalt 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, my God...that was so HOT! And good writing, too, lol. I seriously think you should write another chapter. Maybe a steamy encounter in the locker rooms? I don't know, whatever you wanna do! |
| orangesandmoons 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseO.M.F.G. HOTT! *suddenly faints from loss of blood* I MUST READ MORE!! RAWR! |
| gossipgalmishi 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusestupid cute and unbelievably hot jocks! lol XD nice job! |
| Mistress of Apple Pie 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Awesome one-shot =) |
| Cupid's Jinx 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseHoly muffins, can we say HOTT?!?! I liked it. XD L -x- |
| whipped cream 2007-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseahah, loved it. |
| Jenny Hatter 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOh. Em. Gee. I just knew hockey was good for something. I just knew. And this is it! Woo hoo! Kailum, you rock my socks! Awesome one-shot and a cute ending. Ja ne, Valentine Satiguss |
| Nub in Denial 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseOMFG I LOVE YOU. Hockey is like, the hottest sport ever and rivalries are even more steamy. This was just so amazingly awesome that I pretty much exploded after reading the first paragraph. M... hockey and boy love. Nothing's beats that. |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseRoflcakes? I love it. :D Awesome story. The ending even sums up their whole hate-love relationship. Write more pretty one-shots. :D |
| Night Play 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abusesosososos, this was actually prety cool. xD i usually don't like sports related stuff. xD haha. yumyum. =] |
| Esquirella 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseNICE! |
| CK Shorty 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuse=D I loved that! Great job! |
| Sally Can Wait 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuse"They both ended up getting two minutes in the penalty box for ‘roughing’." LOL. That just cracked me up. xD Sorry. Yay. Another one shot from shmoo. :D Except I had no idea what the crap you were talking about half the time with all of the hockey. xD I've been to a game before...but mostly just thrashed around and screamed with whoever was screaming. Goals for college: 1) Go to a wild party and dance on a table. 2) Start a prank war. 3) Date a hockey player named Jude. :D Loves, Sally :D |
| calamity jane 2007-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job! I really enjoy the idea of rivals and the chemistry between these 2 is so tense. Nice job on the kissing scene too, I really luvd the end of it, it was so perfect! Keep up the writing! |