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Reviews For: Do You Believe
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2007-06-10
ch 1, 		abuseBeautiful...I have to fav. this. Nice use of words, and it flowed really well. I loved the line "This fragile heart fate so cruelly tore Will open, heal, and love again?" and the last line is perfect.
Anthony C. M. Thomas
2007-05-15
ch 1, 		abuseVery nice poem. I enjoyed the flowing words of it. It was like a waterfall cascading down a smooth rocky face. You had a very nice choice of words too. Great work!
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