This is very well written and interesting. The "well written" part is hard to find on and the romance is...not overly angsty, but a dark love that doesn't border on whiny. You've gotten more mature and I can't wait to see your next update. (:

This is an interesting first chapter, I would love to read more of it!

Trinity seems to be on a crash course; despite anything she might say or think, it'll all end in disaster.

...totally super cool. Are you going to continue this? Or is it just a one shot? Either way, I really like it.

-Eveiveneg