Great poem! I really liked...well, the whole thing really. :D

Its very intersesting. Kinda odd, really differnet but good.
=) TTFN
LATDCOMM(located at the darkest corner of my mind)

Very interesting. Indeed quite dark, but in a good way. Though I don't really think 'revengeful' is an actual word. -shrugs- Other than that, great work!
~Katja

OWNAGE! Nice work. I haven't talked to you in ages. Oh i found an error too. "The One the will be smiling" its the fort to last line if you would like to know. I really liked this. Pretty good for a loser