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| this requires pants 2008-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI was really hoping for a happy ending but this one works very well too, especially considering the challenge requirements. It felt very true to the setting - not that I've been there, but still - and the characters were lovable. Beautiful job. |
| righthere431 2008-08-17 ch 1, | abuseI truly loved this story... so powerful and it made me cry =/ |
| GodHelpUsAll 2008-08-11 ch 1, | abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, write a 2ND CHAPTER to this. The writing of this story is so incredible that my breathing started to be erratic at the end and I couldn't stop creating LAKE CRY because i cried for 10 minutes straight after reading this! I BEG YOU, PLEASE WRITE A 2ND CHAPTER! |
| dancing.keys 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. You sure know how to write :) You rawk! Luv, d.k PS: I'm in Singapore now :) |
| airen 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story. I have only read 3 stories from you so far and 2 of them are stories with sad ending. I really do love writing sad stories though I never realize until now how I hated and love reading them at the same. You make great fics... More power to you and your stories! |
| andi 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseno you HAVE to do an alternate ending. pretty please! |
| randompasserby 2008-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abusedamn that was beautiful. if only... sighs.. :( |
| One Last Kiss 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was definitely a tear jerker allright. Damn you :p This was really beautiful. I think you did ok with the british references, allthough i've never used the words 'parky', 'cack', 'a cup'a char' or 'tyre kicker', but maybe they're just traits of London rather than the whole of Britain. This was awesome. Kadie x |
| ophelia 2008-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseno no nononononononoo why! |
| found.eventually 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI.. Uhm.. Wow. I wish I could say more, but my brain completely blanked out on me. Loved it. Loved it, loved, it, loved it. |
| cls81690 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseVery sad, very pretty. I would love it if somehow he didn't die though... |
| OctoberAvenue 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseAw. This was such a beautiful story! I only wished he didn't die :( Amazing job. |
| J 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good! it was so real and full of emotion!i coul've cried! i can't believe you let him die! argh! so sad! anyways, keep up the great work |
| ilovetheopera 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusei can see why this won! i really did cry. not a lot though, which is okay still :D i like the way it was not too emotional to be unrealistic, in particular. the way you managed to tie up all the loose ends is very neat. it's also awesome you're singaporean :D |
| Faithfully Yours 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sad!! Really good though, you wrote it incredibly well... Just, sad, but good job! |