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| found.eventually 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseI.. Uhm.. Wow. I wish I could say more, but my brain completely blanked out on me. Loved it. Loved it, loved, it, loved it. |
| cls81690 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseVery sad, very pretty. I would love it if somehow he didn't die though... |
| OctoberAvenue 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseAw. This was such a beautiful story! I only wished he didn't die :( Amazing job. |
| J 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good! it was so real and full of emotion!i coul've cried! i can't believe you let him die! argh! so sad! anyways, keep up the great work |
| ilovetheopera 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusei can see why this won! i really did cry. not a lot though, which is okay still :D i like the way it was not too emotional to be unrealistic, in particular. the way you managed to tie up all the loose ends is very neat. it's also awesome you're singaporean :D |
| Faithfully Yours 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sad!! Really good though, you wrote it incredibly well... Just, sad, but good job! |
| candlekitty 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI hate you for killing him off. Then again, the story wouldn't have been the same if you hadn't killed him off. Damn. I hear my heart shattering into a million tiny pieces and yes, you certainly fulfilled the criteria because I just cried my eyes out. You're a good writer. I loved "They Call it a Cliche" too. [: |
| S. Arouet Adair 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseSome of the transitions between time and place were a little rouhg. I would have liked something that made me feel like ten years had passed instead of it simply happening. I also thought that it was odd that Easton "left" Casey anything when his death was so sudden and unexpected. Overall I think that it was a cute story. The ending was my favorite part. |
| his post-it jokes. 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusewow ! go, you ! :D |
| Our Lady Silence 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseOh god. I cried so hard. Never make me do so again please. Oh god. Why? Oh my god. -Steph |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was fantastic. Fantastically sad, too. I adore it. --a.k.a. |
| xPink Blossomsx 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseaw, that was so cute yet so sad. i totally loved it |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI'm crying. I LOVE IT! So sad, so amuzzling! Gah, need to stop crying... Okies, I'm good now! Love it! Jinxie -x- |
| Sweet Child 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseGod... this was so far the saddest thing I've ever read. Usually I also avoid such stories, because all the ugly things in real life are already enough. I really didn't know what to expect when I started reading this. By the end, the tears wouldn't stop flowing. It makes me feel kind of angry at you, for making me fall in love with your beautiful characters, to just take them away. But, I also want to thank you, because I can honestly say that this is the most beautiful story I've ever read on Fictionpress. So, thank you... |
| floopfloop 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abusewow! this is the best one shot i hav EVER read argh, u made me cry too ='( luved it |