Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)

~Carm~

Really wonderful chapter. You've got me on the edge of my seat, though, with all this suspense :)

Looking forward to more soon!

~Carm~

i'm enjoying it! man i want to be carried like a cavemen.

That was an excellent start to the story. I'm already quite gripped :) Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~

wow, z, this is great. i'm looking forward to more. P.S. my green eyed guys always turn out good, no matter how they start off. are our minds still linked? =P

I'm left in suspense. Hope you update soon. I'm interested to see what is coming up next.