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Reviews For: Somebody Save Me

SarahSupaStar
2007-05-23
ch 1,
abuseReally great! It kindof reminds me of my favorite poem, "Someone Should Have Told Him". I like how you're calling out for help, and then it's too late. Awesome!
Striped Candycane
2007-05-16
ch 1,
abuseSimple, but works. The short verses were interesting. They almost made me think of someone panting, as if they had been running a long way and couldn't go on any longer...an effect that works really well with the theme.

Keep Writing!
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