"Gaping womb and screaming earth" - I love the imagery here! Though I'm now wondering exactly what this "gaping womb" is... though it makes me think about global warming.

Great use of repetition, too. I hope to see more poetry from you. :)

Cristina

Oh, this was a good one, very interesting and innovative perspective. I like your take on the subject.

xoxo

Hilmary-Oceans

*stares in shock* I'm not sure what to think about this exactly...just wow. Great job.