A sweet cliche. I'm a hopeless romantic. Very cute piece.

so sweet and pure. god i love this. that girl was sure special.

hee. i really liked it. keep on writing ;)
i would love it if u read some of my poetry. it's not that good but please enjoy.
and tell me what u think.

good joy.

Aw! This was really cute, how you described how he fell for her. My favorite line was, "Imagine that-falling in love at five years old. I did at that moment."

GREAT JOB!

this is only the second thing i've read of yours, and i'm already convinced that you and you alone can pull off plotlines like this /beautifully/. seriously, anything like 'best friends forever and secretly in love' or 'in love with my best friend's little sister', that's hard to do well, but oh my god. this was cute. this was so incredibly cute.

oh my goodness..
that was amazing.
you write extremely well :)

aww thats so cute i luff it!

Beautiful lovely!