Yay! This one was awesome, just like the others! The rhyme scheme confused me at points, though. But all in all I think you conveyed the doll's lonliness very well. But now I feel sad for it...dolly all alone...T.T

morphine, that was an awesome poem! i think you got the POV across really well...keep up the great work!

Quite poetic and rhythmic. Wonderful job.

Sorry; I'm no good for reviews.

-STIX-

'cut it with a kiss'... whoa... deep... awesome... ^.^...

Oh, it's ON! Can I smack that guy?
Otherwise, it was very heartfelt how the speaker describes the other girl with a hate/amiration tone.
Keep up the good work!!
This has been The Wesselstein!

I liked this one because it showed how the speaker can't heal and how much St. Jimmy meant to them.
And it would be funnier if I knew who St. Jimmy was. (is?) 8D

o_0 ... -sarcastic voice- how wonderful... JK.. it a little hard 4 me 2 follow, but its good.. is it supposed 2 b a... 'true' poem... like ur true feelings toward some1... u don't have 2 tell meh who if u no want 2.. but pleeze don't say shorty.. or scotty... XD.. that would b...eww!... alex called meh and he said u left ur pants @ his house... JK


8D

Aw. I like the fact that you can't tell which word is being discussed it which part of the poem. It wasn't stupid!! Great job!