This has certainly changed from what I read before, and I really like it! I have trouble imagining some of the parts, but the plot is really good. And I don't remember you telling me that you were going to use the rose in this, but I think it works well.

ah the "one fine rose" thing. Interesting... I remember you telling me about that.

o what are these orbs I wonder? they sound kinda like materia. is that at all similar?