Reviews for Mystery and Chemistry

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hanahan 2008-01-04 ch 15,	abuseoh, please please continue, I really want to know what's going to happen..
BKGal-24 2007-05-24 ch 16,	abuseI liked the fact that neither completely freaked out in the morning. I can sense that John probably wouldn't feel as guilty seeing as how in his mind, Diana is pretty much it as far as ever seeing any other woman in his future, so what diff does it make if it's now or when they're married. I sort of have that attitude sometimes, like "oh well, doesn't really matter what I do, what's God gonna do about it?" Also I think the readers can sense John's apathy toward God without directly writing it out. I dunno, try it. Whenever I find I want my readers to GET something, I typically just leave it a mystery or have them come up with ideas in their head about the reasons for a characters behavior/emotions. That's pretty much what I did with my first novel. I managed to cut about 50,0 words, I was so excited! haha. It makes more and more sense about Diana hiding herself from John. Man, if I were her, I would totally keep it a secret too! But we all know that's not healthy... Can't wait for the next update.
Lady R 2007-05-23 ch 16,	abuseYour writing continues to intrigue me as I can feel the emotions that the characters are facing. And the way you end your chapters always leave me begging for more! It's killing me that Diana is so ** herself. Hopefully, John will break through to her. Great chapter!
Lady R 2007-05-22 ch 15,	abuseWow! I can feel the pain and anguish in this chapter--it was really good! I do hope they don't retract from each other when they come to their "senses". Update soon, please!!
BKGal-24 2007-05-22 ch 15,	abuseahh, I'm surprised the abortion card didn't spark up in my ideas, but wow, that totally explains Di's behavior. Now I have to remember if she wrote that abortion paper before or after she had one. Haha, I always want more details in your romantic scenes, but then you'd have to push up the rating and there are virigin eyes on this site! Take care, great emotion and the choppiness fit well.
Rayne Logan 2007-05-22 ch 15,	abuse:O wow... that's definitely one way to comfort each other... lol... I hope they don't regret it when they realise :(
missc1314 2007-05-22 ch 15,	abuseupdate soon! update soon! update soon!
Lady R 2007-05-21 ch 14,	abuseI'm really enjoying your writing as it made me mad and then sad for John in the same chapter. Please keep going, I'm really enjoying this story.
Ginne 2007-05-21 ch 14,	abusei really like this version of diana and John's story, i look forward to reading more!
BKGal-24 2007-05-20 ch 14,	abuseHey there. Okay, so this chapter definitely left me with bad feelings toward John, but that's 'cause you did a good job at stirring that up in me through his actions! I think I would have reacted the same way that Di did fer sure, but controlling much? Wow, it simply displays how much John loves her. In a way it mirrors the relationship I had with my husband (who coincidentally has the same name, but is not a Jonathan) when we were dating, I thought he was too good for me and he'd surely not love me if he knew all my "secrets." I'm thinking that Di's secrets are worse than just having sex with Greg. It sounds like she might have gotten into cult/satanic practices or something...and in that case I definitely see her resisting John and being depressed over her mistakes. Way to keep us on the edge. I take it this is the crisis that is going to be a major turning point in the story and their relationship! Thanks for a great read, I alway look forward to your updates.
Ginne 2007-05-20 ch 4,	abusehelp me out here, which of your other stories does this prom chapter remind me of?
Lady R 2007-05-18 ch 13,	abuseI like this...please, please continue!
under the influence 2007-05-18 ch 2,	abuseI think the paragraph divider before she mentioned Spanish 4 wasn't necessary...but otherwise good chap :)
BKGal-24 2007-05-17 ch 12,	abuseHi, I'm semi-back. Instead of tackling your other longer stories, I was intrigued by this one and I gather you've redone it. Your writing and characters keep me hooked and I only voice my peeves to get you thinking. Again most authors on this site tend to look for empty praise. I think I and probably a handful of others actually like having our writing analyzed and critiqued. When I look back at my first writings, I cringe and gag, but am thankful that people have believed in my writing enough to make it better. I know you prefer PMs for critiques, so I'll do that maybe later tonight. It's been a fun study break (way too long of a study break! But that's 'cause your writing is addicting!) Take care! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Dezi E 2007-05-17 ch 12,	abuseHmm... THis is interesting ANd different from what you usually do. I like it.

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