 All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-05-20 . chapter 1O. Good question.
I think this is a perfect lenght. Short, but sweet. Lovely job.
Thanks for the review!
Rowan. |
 unshattered 2007-05-20 . chapter 1I think you brought forward all that was needed to be said even if it was short, which I don't think it was. Each line was very powerful, great work :) |
 sweets555 2007-05-17 . chapter 1good job! |
 Ashelin 2007-05-17 . chapter 1I think that it was a really good length. Questioning, but good. I can sadly relate to this...a lot. Great job, keep writing. |
 EyesEmphatic 2007-05-16 . chapter 1Wow, only 4 lines and still so powerful. I really like this. |