Reviews for The High School from Hell

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BluePillow75 2008-08-29 ch 29,	abuseOmg! I love this story so much, she so funny and and Matt is so annoying and perfect! ^^ YAY for you to have made this story!
Mimerz 2008-08-27 ch 2,	abusehaha I love Rohsh
Abi Dawn 2008-08-22 ch 30,	abusewow that was by far the best story ever! i laughed my ** off. loved all her sarcasm. keep writing. u rock.
lalala :) 2008-08-20 ch 30, anon.	abuseomg ! that was the best story I have EVER read ! seriously your like a real author :P keep writing stories
soccergirl 2008-08-18 ch 8, anon.	abuseYou story is really funny, but it is also really confusing. It jumps all over the place and does not flow.
weeeangie 2008-08-17 ch 30,	abuseI love this story! LMAO!! that girl has the sweetest comebacks! One of my favorties for shure!
Lera 2008-08-17 ch 30, anon.	abuseYo!! SARA MOODY! Moody is right, because you have a really bad attitude. Hope has a great writing style, it's catchy, new and refreshing. I haven't read anything like her story before and have thoroughly enjoyed it. You obviously wrote it anonymously because you knew you were wrong. I am writing anonymously because I have happened to already reviewed for her, and have complimented her amazing story already. (And yes, it is amazing!) The reason you think it's all over the place is because you are unable to comprehend the supercalifragalisticexpialidoushasness before you, (Yes that is now a word!) and you're jealous. So go suck on a pixie stick and get over yourself.
Cupid's Jinx 2008-08-17 ch 30,	abuseHoly Muffins! That was awesome! I loved it! I kinda had to pause reading half way through at 3am cuz I was this close to snorting loudly, and my parents are only next door :P Hehehe Awesomeness! Lyra -x-
Sarah Moody 2008-08-16 ch 8, anon.	abuseYour story is like on crack, and sadly its not a compliment. It has a great story line, but the dialogue gets confusing and so does alot of the just general story. I think some of the colloquil terms are okay, but sometimes I think you overuse them. Same with the inner dialogue in her head. Every once in awhile it's okay, but use sparingly, not two or three times in a chapter. Sometimes once a chapter is too much which makes her seem insane, which isn't a good thing. If you don't have a Beta reader, I would strongly suggest one. Or at least read through the stuff before you post it, sometimes Fictionpress messes up formatting. All in all it seems like a good story, but I can't finish because it's all over the place.
Cait 2008-08-14 ch 30, anon.	abuseAw i loved it!
xxUnidentified14xx 2008-08-13 ch 30,	abuseAW Fukiz it's over. DAMN YOU!
Hopelessly Cliche 2008-08-13 ch 30,	abuseYay, I finished it...reading it I mean! Yesterday actually, I was up all night reading lol. But yah, ah-mazing story! Loved it! Seriously that was a bunch of awesomness! It was a fabbity, fab, fab, fab, story! (OK, am I overdoing it?) Anyway, great job, can't wait to read your other stories!! :D HC xx
Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-08-13 ch 30,	abuselove the story!
Enigma Ladies 2008-08-13 ch 30,	abuseOMG I LOVE YOU! This is a perfect way to end the most perfect story EVER! Lera and I were talking yesterday and we both agreed that, had you wanted to, you could have gotten this story published it's so great. Though I will miss reading up on Addy, I'm eager to read your upcoming stories. Take your time on them, though, as you did with this one; it makes the story even better when you hold us in suspense, hee-hee. And thank you so much for mentioning my sis and me in your author note! I read that and was so astonished and proud and grateful to be given thanks to by you! It really makes me feel fantastic. :D Can't wait to hear from you again! LUVES! ~Genie~ PS. HOT TOPIC HECKS YEAH!
ophelia 2008-08-12 ch 3, anon.	abusewoah...ur story is kinda like all over the place...it seems to me like ur thoughts at that moment spill onto the page..then u forget and add something else..i think ur story could be really good if you would let it develop and slow down...

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