Love your work! :)

Aw, that was so cute. I never thought a fic full of short, written letters with no third person action words would pull me in so deeply, but I couldn't stop reading.

Excellent work.

"You just keep on being driven to insanity there, it’s the only way I can get your attention." This sentence was very confusing. I still don't really understand what it meant, hahaha.

I forgot to mention it, but last chapter I thought the jokes about damaging his manhood were hilarious. ;)

That was rather sappy, but what love story isn't sappy at some point? I still wish that you would have fleshed out all of these stories with some details. You give them as an author's note at the bottom of the last chapter, but why couldn't you have incorporated that into your story somehow?

-Jesse
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Hmm... I still long for some depth to their relationship. More flirting... and that corny "I like someone, but you don't get to know who... wait it's you!!" thing? I did that to my boyfriend (he didn't get it and ended up telling me he liked me later psht) anyway. It's still lame! :P You could do some cute clever things with this... but yeah.

I liked the fade from hate to friendship. It worked rather nicely. His confession to her is pretty much ridiculous, like you said. But yeah... I don't think his crush on her really qualifies as "obsession" though... he doesn't show enough signs of it.

-Jesse

These letters would be more interesting if they were longer so they could explain some stuff, like where they are and what they're writing - emails? why would you pay 40 cents to mail something that is two sentences long to someone you hate? It doesn't seem right. And the part where she says "I'm sorry if I offended you.." o.O No she's not. She's been purposefully trying to offend him the entire time, haha.

It would also be nice to find out if they actually have a reason for hating each other or if it's the stereotypical "oh you're popular so I hate you" stuff... which there is way too much of in the world for no good reason. :P

I think this story will be interesting, though, if you can pull off a good transition from hate to love to... obsession, I think is what you're planning. :) Hopefully no one will end up dead... there's so much of that in your stories hahaha

-Jesse
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well, this is rather sappy, cheesy, whatever words there are for it, but I love it nonetheless. Maybe that's because I'm addicted to happy endings, but that's okay, I think.

By the way, I loved the idea with the letters, that was something different

That's really sweet! Your stories are really easy to read, and I can tell you enjoy writing them!
You have real talent!

Aw, that was cute! Sappy? Yes. Cheesy? Yes. But very cute, it made me all giggly and warm and fuzzy inside. :)

Oh goodness I love this!! It was so sweet!!
In fact... *adds to favorite stories*
Tee hehe I love the last PS that Aaron put.. =]]
~Brie

Loved the 'letter-writing style' of storytellng, and thier dislike and clashes came out load and clear. If you write again in this style you could try making the letters longer? Probably wouldnt suit this particular story (cuz they hate each other and wouldnt want to say much), but with the letters saying more - it gives the reader more deatail (like why do they hate each other so much!?) :) lol

bex x

I liked it.. it seemed kinda sappy but hey, a love story is supposed to be like that. The beginning was what drew me in.. But really that was a great story. Letter/story.. =]

that was perfect! *sigh*

Ah, no, it wasn't crappy at all! It was sappy, but sometimes you just need to read one, for giggles, ya know?
I haven't read a sappy story in FOREVER! I think I almost cried.
I'm a sappy person. :P Great story, I lurved it so.

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Well. Let's just say the last chapter was the sappiest of 'em all. Still, I enjoyed it. I liked the last line about Sara Dmitriov having a nice ring to it, it was the perfect/best finish you could've used. By the way, I'm sure you had fun writing it, it's like, easy writing, no?

Cheers...

aww!
I really liked this
the style was unusual, but really good

different from your usual romance stories, which was what made it so good in my opinion