hahaha oh my Love Lins personality~
sarcastic and striaght forward.
He gives a vibe like he knows more than you think=]
I like it~
I want to know what happens with Shanye!

This was very cute and dramatic ^^ I enjoyed it a lot. I'm also quite happy it had a happy ending. Poor poor Lin...he went through so much crap O_o For that, I think Shanye should sleep on the couch for awhile *hmph*. But it was a very cute story. :D

I was going to say you did leave the perfect opening as to be another book to this. With the whole mael or whatever his name is. You never explained what happened to him. Did he leave Lin alone? Did he just magically vanish or something. ^.~ That whole sort a thing.
BUT:
I have to say I love this story. Very creative, and extreamly touching. It takes a good bit for a story to really make me tear up and this one I CRIED reading it! I kept having to wipe my eyes just to see the words... Wonderful story!

BG

Oh my. o:

I really love your story, it's very touching and sweet. I really like the storyline. Development wise, there could be some part that can be elaborated more. Thanks for the story^^

Very interesting story. I spent the whole day reading it. :P Going to look at your other stories now :)

O My GOD! That was the most amazing story I have ever read! So much better than any published book or fanfic or original story ever! Ack it was so good all I can do to express to awesomeness of this story is to type random letters...sdkufhaloiufheyugseroiusgdfvkusyd !
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okay I just read this whole story in one day and it's amazing. Pleease write a sequel! please please please :] Or maybe even a series of one-shots about Lin and Shanye's life together an stuff.

Pleaase?

dude i can't believe i just read this now
i should've read it way before
dude this is so fucking awesome
i'm not a big fan of the magic thingies but
i liked this a hell lot

keep up the great work man

I love your stories! i'm your fans since reading 'The Deal'. Eager to wait your next work...

awhie
i like it alot!

I LOVE THIS STORY!! Its so good!! :D

That was an AMAZING story. Aww, if I wasnin a room full of people I'd probably tear up a bit more hehe. It really was a great storry...And deffinatl should be a sequel. Love it. Off to read more of your stories.

Whisp

Amazingly beautiful!


That's really all I have to say. I am speechless and... just.. amazing!

OMG That story was wonderful...They ending made me cry...I couldnt look down at my computer because my vision would get blurry.