|Reviews for collision a rewrite|
| this is britt 7/12/07 . chapter 1
i didn't expect something so powerful. i feel like i'm walking out with a black eye. you are constantly amazing me; that is a fact.
| recycle rhymes 6/17/07 . chapter 1
it has a good flow and diction. the words are weaved very nicely. keep on going.
| hey maria 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Short poetry is my favorite, especially when it's as concise and powerful as this.
| Alice Faraday 5/17/07 . chapter 1
That was interesting. It reminds me a lot of this certain style...oh, what's it called...imagism?...symbolism?...derived from the haiku... not quite sure, but it's cool.
| Ashelin 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Thas was a really nasty image, but it definately put out a statement. The last line especially. Great job.