Reviews for Giovanni: The Crimson Stigma

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The Banshee's Tears 2008-07-21 ch 27,	abusewoa, explosive chapter! Morridgan's calm was quite amusing. another well done chapter!
Carmel March 2008-06-21 ch 26,	abuseFantastic job on this chapter. Absolute genius :) Can't wait for more! ~Carm~
Limited Edition 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseTwo hundred thousand years?! Humans haven't existed for that long! The language is varied and that's nice. This is nice as a prologue! It draws the reader in.
Muse of Scrolls 2008-06-06 ch 26,	abuseHoly crap! When I read chapter 24, I nearly fell out of my chair after seeing Adara get shot through. I was very relieved that she came out all right as did most of the others. Now, you've peaked my curiosity yet again with the arrival of these new Vampiric Hunters led by someone Adara knows. Sounds like a real "charmer" if you know what I mean. Chapter 25 was rather intense especially when Doc arrived on the scene. I really need to go back and read a few of the later chapters to remember his personality more (not what we saw in Caleb's dream, mind you). I had forgotten how overly protective he was of Adara, and way to go Amira! She really managed to throw Doc for a loop, though not with positive results...except Adara now standing up for herself more. Really wonderful new chapters, and you got this latest one out pretty fast (I know why, poor Ada hugs). But marvelous updates and looking forward to more, hopefully some chappies involving Marius. grins
The Banshee's Tears 2008-06-05 ch 26,	abusehahaha loved the chapter. amira and adara kickin some testosterone around. great job!
The Banshee's Tears 2008-05-28 ch 25,	abuseoh wow that was a fantastic chapter. who are these new hunters i wonder? they have surely made for an excellent chapter. great job with the wit and intense emotions conveyed through your characters actions.
Carmel March 2008-05-25 ch 24,	abuseWow, really great chapter. I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to read it! Full of everything that makes me adore this story. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter :) ~Carm~
Muse of Scrolls 2008-04-10 ch 24,	abuseThe previous chapter, Ada, was so amazingly passionate and wonderful. Having both Caleb and Adara finally open up to one another after so long was like releasing a breath that had been held for far too long for one's comfort. But that first new breath feels so good, the former discomfort's pushed aside almost immediately. As for this current chapter, holy smokes. I can agree with Yuri's anger after finding out Draegos' secret, but to take it out on his people really isn't showing Draegos that he can handle having that kind of power. I just hope that Adara is able to do something to stop him. And it's not likely he'll calm down easily. So we'll just have to see what happens in the next chapter. Looking forward to it. :D
The Banshee's Tears 2008-04-09 ch 24,	abuseintense chapter! it was a pleasure to read as always!
Olivia C. 2008-03-27 ch 2,	abusethis story just keeps getting better and better.
Carmel March 2008-03-23 ch 23,	abuseThis story makes me smile. Keep up the amazingness :) ~Carm~
Adara of Giovanni 2008-03-17 ch 22,	abuseI apologize to everyone who reads my fics, and read my statement below. I figured it was better to just erase the childish tantrums, instead of keeping them up. I apologize again for my rude behavior. :D (It in no way was meant for Carmel who is a great writer and has me transfixed with her fics.) Thanks guys!
Adara of Giovanni 2008-03-17 ch 23,	abuseFor the reviewer who posted anonymously, thank you for your dissection of my work. :-) I would have replied to you in kind, (PM, had you been a member) but as you don't have an account here, I will reply on my own review board. I appreciate your pointing out my shortcomings, though most of what you're stating is simply this: Taste. I stated a repeated amount of times that this was nothing but a trial run of the work I will be posting. Those who've reviewed before you, understand this. You also missed the entire purpose of reviewing. A critical review includes stating things you like, and DON'T appreciate in the story. English Professor as you may be, I think you may want to look up a thing or two on posting a critical analysis of my work. Not to mention..."Professor" you may want to work on your passive aggressive tone, as it only proves what an adolescent you really are. For those of you who read my work and review it, the below review was made a person who's been trolling me since she figured out her work was less than what she thought it was. Just ignore her, I'm sure she'll crawl back under her rock.
Carmel March 2008-02-24 ch 22,	abuseLovely job. You've got a serious talent! Keep it up. I'm loving it :) ~Carm~
Muse of Scrolls 2008-02-21 ch 22,	abuseWow...just wow, Ada. I'm sorry to say I hadn't read it beforehand, but now that I've caught up, I'm very happy that I did. The first 10 chapters had me going for the longest time until I reached the end of chapter 10, then, whoa! Thrown for a loop! I really admire your development of all your characters. Each of them have a depth that shows there is more to the person than what one first sees, whether that depth is negative or positive. And Caleb's really starting to grow on me...can't say that about many vampires. And I'll also tell you this, Ada. I've enjoyed reading this story much more than other published stories like it. :) Looking forward to the next chapter as I'm sure it will be good.

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