it's funny that you don't like this one, because i think it's one of my favorite things you've done)

I didn't think it was that confusing; no more than any poem usually is. And I'm generally pretty bad when it comes to analyzing these things. Definetly better than any of my pathetic attempts at poetry. I like it.

It didn't really tell a story, but I liked the words you used, they seemed to give the poem an... imaginative... feel.

Nice rhyming, by the way. :]

Keep writing