Reviews for The cars fell flaming on the roads

blahtong 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abuseI thought it strange you mentioned 'the roads in Karachi' have you happened to travel to that city? I liked the poem by the way too. I feel like I can relate to it in some way.
Maranwe Telrunya 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseWeird... Haha, but in a good way. It's very different. Made me think of some cult sacrificing cars to the sky... I liked the last line. ~Maranwe
whispered something profoun... 2007-05-26 ch 1,	abusethank you for the review! this is such a sad piece. it's very prettily written though
recycle rhymes 2007-05-26 ch 1,	abusethis is morbid - i can't exactly say why. interesting - makes me think of karma.
Edgar Wellington 2007-05-17 ch 1,	abusethis is not a subject I can feel much for though I have to admit to a certain awe over kashmir and the himalayas, which are kinda nearby. I do love the rhythm of the poem quite a lot. It has a similar metre to your last posting. I've tried this discipline, its not as easy as it might seem. Keep writing Maria, you are talented.
dollface and her cancer 2007-05-17 ch 1,	abusetypically, i'm not such a huge fan of structured poems, but the skeleton of this one holds it up and makes it sturdy. even without the editing that you plan on doing, evidently, i like this a lot. it stands on its own, a lot of imagery and the repetition is done right.