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tmelange1 2008-04-27 ch 14,	abuseGreat read. I like your characters and you're doing a good job with the plot. Bravo.
tsubaki-dono 2008-04-15 ch 14,	abuseI only just discovered this story and read it all the way through. Must say that I quite like the background you've woven through the story. There are gaps, but it's fine. I like that you weave the story without explaining everything, this keeps a reader curious and guessing --it does me, at least! And I appreciate the characters, I'm beginning to get a grip on who they are and what their personality is like. Your style is pretty good because you SHOW your readers the story instead of telling them; too often you get writers who explain things lengthily and it becomes something like a monologue about a story instead of an actual tale. I'm a little off where Kraven is concerned, though. His initial submission didn't shine through so clearly after it was established that he's been a slave for over thirty years. I refer to that he's already challenged Ace without having been draw out too much from his trained-in slave mentality. I thought it was good keeping when he tried to offer his body, but there wasn't consistency after that. Don't take this the wrong way; I realise that it must be that he was so comfortable around Ace that he found it easier to be drawn out. And you did explain that he knew he wasn't a good slave precisely for driving all his masters bat-** asking and questioning; he has irrepressible curiosity. The Gryffon is a little beyond me at the moment. I take his presence to mean that he is a guardian and not just a mere familiar. Royalty? I don't know what else anyone has commented or reviewed on this story, but my guess is that Ace is the blood-line descendant of the King who bound Kraven; the Blood Reaper. I am also guessing that Ace hasn't linked the prophecy (I think that was what the Darhowian General was muttering about in the prologue to the Blood Reaper's back as he was being taken away) to the Blood Reaper. Ahh... suspenseful. All in all, I'm loving the story. I'm so glad that you're sharing this tale, and I look forward both to more chapters and the rest of this trilogy. Happy writing!
LaylaLivesLoosely 2008-04-08 ch 14,	abuseI really enjoyed reading this. I want Kraven and Ace to get together! I'll be on the lookout for updates.
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 14, anon.	abusei LOVE hyn! he's awesome i'm glad he's hanging around
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 13, anon.	abuseWho let the dawgs out? Who?! Who?! Who?! hehe, that song came to mind in this chapter.
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 12, anon.	abusestupid ** prophecies... lol... this is getting complicated. but i think kraven can get around killing ace.
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 11, anon.	abuseZOMFG! WHAT!
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 10, anon.	abuseAce joking around kinda caught me off guard. it was nice tho. im happy rowan and adra are gonna work it out. ^^
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 9, anon.	abuseadras in LOVVE!! I like the flashbacks. they kinda fluff out rowan and adras relationship. good job.
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 8, anon.	abuseincubuses are fun!
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 7, anon.	abusei wanna hug kraven. poor guy. i really really liked this chapter for some reason. teehee!
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseace is a bad boy. lol. you tell him kraven (i still think tyrren for some reason)
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseaw... so cute. nice to know ace has a soft spot.
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 4, anon.	abusewoah, ace really is pretty powerful. at least the manticore's taken care of.
random reviewer girl 2008-04-07 ch 3, anon.	abusewiat...is that tyrren? damn, he's changed. a sex slave? poor guy. ace better be nice

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