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A YEAR AND NO UPDATES XD
I stumbled upon this on some random community, and it's really good! I hope you haven't given up on it! But, I have yet to lurk around your profile so... :P


I hope you update this soon! It deserves to be completed, as I believe it's interesting...definitely a...page...turner... (loader? xD whatever...)

I really like this plot- original fo sho~


SO DON'T GIVE UP ON IT AND UPDATE!

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Its been more than 3 months... T~T I want to read more of your story!

This sounds AMAZING I have to read it... hmm... love it already
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Interesting. I like the sound of it.

just started reading/loving your story and its been MORE than three months since it shows that you've updated. is this story going to continue? *hopeful*

hhm... seems you lied! said u would update in less than three months and its been about a year... love this story its VERY interesting... wonder what ut is that ace knows and why the wolfy guy is gonna stay... and if my suspicions that ace is the 'prince' or whatever of Reilt omg i just realised... if... ace is the prince or whatever... then he can take off the coller cuz hes of the same blood... and... that thing about extracting revenge in the begining and the future vision... kinda line up if ace IS od royal blood... and the necklace... sounds kingly... if ace dies can he come back to life... didnt ace say something about a prophecy? im sure he did... and about... kraven... soo.. if he thinks kraven is in the profecy and he KNOWS the profecy... then... does he already know hes gonna die by his hand? wonder what THAT is... from chapter 12... at first i thought it it was feelings for him... but now im not so sure and.. he said somehing about a prophecy... hmm mplease finishe! id love to see what happenes and the otehr sequals you said there would be three! PLEASE FINISH! this is like.. killing me with the suspension!

Hey

I love these characters they are fantastic! I really hope you keep writing this because I really want to know whats going to happen next.
Please get the next chapte out soon.
Thankies

Another excelent story! I really enjoyed the setting of this piece; the way it's a mixture between historical and modern. Your word choice, the way you describe events and characters, it all works so well together. This has also got to be one of my favorite fantasy stories. I'm a big fantasy fan, but only if the story is well written. Yours most definatly is. I can't wait to see what happens next, looking forward to an update!

well...that was only slightly disapointing. I really like the story, and realize that you haven't updated anything in over a year, but I do hope that you get back to it some time soon. This was a good story.

Are you going to continue writing this story?
It is very good.

i love it :D
plz update soon :3

I absolutely love this story and am sad to see that there haven't been any updates recently. Does this mean that you have placed this story on hiatus? I really hope not. The characters are very well written and I am anxious to see how this story progresses. I can't wait until Kraven gets the dampner off and we can truly see what he is made of. There are a lot of unanswered questions floating around and I can't wait to see how they are all tied together. Please don't abandon this story! Hopefully we will see an update soon.

Great read. I like your characters and you're doing a good job with the plot. Bravo.

I only just discovered this story and read it all the way through. Must say that I quite like the background you've woven through the story. There are gaps, but it's fine. I like that you weave the story without explaining everything, this keeps a reader curious and guessing --it does me, at least!

And I appreciate the characters, I'm beginning to get a grip on who they are and what their personality is like. Your style is pretty good because you SHOW your readers the story instead of telling them; too often you get writers who explain things lengthily and it becomes something like a monologue about a story instead of an actual tale.

I'm a little off where Kraven is concerned, though. His initial submission didn't shine through so clearly after it was established that he's been a slave for over thirty years. I refer to that he's already challenged Ace without having been draw out too much from his trained-in slave mentality. I thought it was good keeping when he tried to offer his body, but there wasn't consistency after that. Don't take this the wrong way; I realise that it must be that he was so comfortable around Ace that he found it easier to be drawn out. And you did explain that he knew he wasn't a good slave precisely for driving all his masters bat-** asking and questioning; he has irrepressible curiosity.

The Gryffon is a little beyond me at the moment. I take his presence to mean that he is a guardian and not just a mere familiar. Royalty? I don't know what else anyone has commented or reviewed on this story, but my guess is that Ace is the blood-line descendant of the King who bound Kraven; the Blood Reaper. I am also guessing that Ace hasn't linked the prophecy (I think that was what the Darhowian General was muttering about in the prologue to the Blood Reaper's back as he was being taken away) to the Blood Reaper. Ahh... suspenseful.

All in all, I'm loving the story. I'm so glad that you're sharing this tale, and I look forward both to more chapters and the rest of this trilogy. Happy writing!

I really enjoyed reading this. I want Kraven and Ace to get together! I'll be on the lookout for updates.