Wow. It is KILLING ME that they don't know. I just feel this bubbling in my tummy.

The chapter with Rowan was perfect. I prefer the one that you went with instead of the original. It was just very cute.

I'm wondering if the mage stone works. And if it does, why didn't kraven's masters use it on him?
That's all, I hope you update soon :)

I review even if I'm not sure if you still read your reviews. I just wanted to say I loved this story sooooooooo much and I'm really sad you won't finish it. I wanted soooo bad to see how Kraven/Tyreen would react when he learned who he really is. And why he is not aging ? Well I suppose I'll never know... It's too bad.

Your writting was really great !

Ferz

update!

Hi,

Kudos my dear. I love the story thus far . I hope your muses are still tinkering away at it. I really do. :)

Usually, I'm not a fan of amnesiac characters that do a complete flip in personality.. But then I started thinking - well, we really didn't get a look at the boys personality before he was taken as a prisoner of war. We only knew what we were told by how others perceived him. And then there's the matter of him being thrust into war at such an early age... So perhaps, if things had been different in the world, he would have been a softy instead of a killer? In the last chapter, I have to say, it started to get more interesting. When he stepped in between the warewolf and Ace. THAT makes sense. An unconscious response through conditioned habit. Someone with obscenely strong powers, for instance, would, perhaps, experience phantom impulses given by said powers. I hope there is more of that to come. Not to mention the tease of a Prophacy? Oooooh, doooo teeell, pleeeeaaaassssse? ( _ )

Now. The necklace around Ace's neck? is that the key to freeing the Reaper? Haha... Maaaaybe. Can't wait to see.

I love the supernatural element to the story. The way it plays in with the characters, and how you've tweaked them to make them your own. Not enough good fantasy out there. Love fantasy, :}

As I said before, I am not such a fan of meek boys, but he' is starting to show a backbone, starting to react on instinct, and the prospect of this experience leading to a certain level of compassion and empathy for the Reaper, does in part make sense - IF that is at all what you intended.

If so, I hope you keep writing this epic Trilogy. :D. Yes, please please do.

Thank you,

Uwaa, this story's really exciting and fun!

Kraven's a ninja! *well, a mage realistically, but y'know*

I really love this, sad when you can't read more of really awesome stories... Hope you'll keep this up sometime

I just read this story and I have to say it was one of the best on fictionpress. I love your characters. Tought the sad part is that you said you would update in less than 3 months and now we are at 3 years. I hop you will update soon :D

I just read this story and I have to say it was one of the best on fictionpress. I love your characters. Tought the sad part is that you said you would uppdate in less than 3 months and now we are at 3 years. I hop you will uppdate soon :D

Ah man! This is SUCH a good story! I know the chances of you updating after all this time is practically zip, but... Please? Lol.

This story is completely gripping!

I've just read this, and am now sad. You know why? Because this story is freaking awesome and there isn't another awesome chapter for me to read. Oh no! :( What will I do...wait of course. Update soon, I along with many others will be waiting. Lovely story. _

:O

A YEAR AND NO UPDATES XD

I stumbled upon this on some random community, and it's really good! I hope you haven't given up on it! But, I have yet to lurk around your profile so... :P

I hope you update this soon! It deserves to be completed, as I believe it's interesting...definitely a...page...turner... (loader? xD whatever...)

I really like this plot- original fo sho

SO DON'T GIVE UP ON IT AND UPDATE!

MOARNAOPLZKTHNXBAI

Its been more than 3 months... TT I want to read more of your story!

This sounds AMAZING I have to read it... hmm... love it already

B

Interesting. I like the sound of it.

just started reading/loving your story and its been MORE than three months since it shows that you've updated. is this story going to continue? *hopeful*

hhm... seems you lied! said u would update in less than three months and its been about a year... love this story its VERY interesting... wonder what ut is that ace knows and why the wolfy guy is gonna stay... and if my suspicions that ace is the 'prince' or whatever of Reilt omg i just realised... if... ace is the prince or whatever... then he can take off the coller cuz hes of the same blood... and... that thing about extracting revenge in the begining and the future vision... kinda line up if ace IS od royal blood... and the necklace... sounds kingly... if ace dies can he come back to life... didnt ace say something about a prophecy? im sure he did... and about... kraven... soo.. if he thinks kraven is in the profecy and he KNOWS the profecy... then... does he already know hes gonna die by his hand? wonder what THAT is... from chapter 12... at first i thought it it was feelings for him... but now im not so sure and.. he said somehing about a prophecy... hmm mplease finishe! id love to see what happenes and the otehr sequals you said there would be three! PLEASE FINISH! this is like.. killing me with the suspension!