Adra wasn't at all what I expeted, but I think he might grow on me. I still feel like Ace is picking on Fraven, but we'll have to wait and see how things turn out. :) very good and can't wait for more!

:O Oh my! Well, I'm sure he can avoid the whole killing thing...I wonder what Ace does to anger him, anyway? Hmm... I hope Kraven figures out who he is soon! Dramatic irony kills me..._

Tch. I would have preferred the past. lol

is it the future or the past? and right, it was quite unexpected. WHY? but then again, it adds the drama, hahahha ;)

update soon...

XOXOXOXOXO

luv u

Ahh, another day, another chapter, another review! Don't you just love that cycle? 'Cos I do, I do! Anyway, I dislike the times two. I just hated it. xD But that's just me. I already mentioned about my hate of it, there's no use babbling on and on about why I do.

In spite of my obvious and unnecessary hate, I like Adra. He's so nice. He's so-so, like a demon that everyone wants in animes. xD A turnover in the rough. A shining gem in the midst of destruction-he's the ultimate form of demonic love. Dun dun dun.

Rowan is pretty positive about her situamuation. I like her a bit. She's pretty awesome, y'know? :D She awright, I guess.

Ace is still an ass, and I'm not too surprised at that. Oh well, he grew up that way, I guess. Makes you realize that sometimes, people are actually the product of their environment. That makes me sad. ;[

Kraven was so compassionate here that it made me wonder why he was so unemotional when he was younger. Oh well. Not going to wonder at all. Nuh uh. No sirree bob...

This chapter was okay. It could've been better: I like the original plan better, honest. But, it turned out great, so, woohoo! I can't wait for the next chapter! :3

I like this version better. ] I WANT HIM TO REGAIN IS MEMORY. IT WILL BE SO -drool-!

I definitely like the version in the chapter better. Much happier :P Besides, I like Adra! Oh, Dragon's Tear...I wonder if he'll be able to use it to see who he once was? That'd be good :P

I can't wait for the look on Ace's face when he figures out who Kraven is.

I think the new version is better. The original version wouldn't work.

Well, I like this version better, it's less tragic...

Hehehe... I was about to think that Kraven will use dragon tears sooner or later.

This chapter is nicer than the last one. And I like the way Ace being a little bit nicer or at least not too rigid. Because he seems to be stand off-ish, it gets too irritating sometimes.

I luv this story... heheheh

luv u

ta...ta...

Stop adding stuff to it. Forcing me to review on here. Damn you. *shakes fist*

But I like

I like all the little flash-back scenes. I keep picturing Adra as Nightcrawler from X-men SORRY My mind is weird; I can't help it. :(

I'm a sucker for flashbacks. To me, they always add a bit more life, a bit more depth, and comparing this to the other version you passed me - it definitely does. You basically made the chapter go from "coolness" to "omgness" and yesh, omgness is higher than coolness on the awesome-scale.

Don't ask. I'll prolly forget all about an awesome-scale by tomorrow anyway. Ha.

Reda

Uhmm... good stuff. Better than the last chapter I guess...

I guess you could put some more desriptive words or more conversation.

In general, I think it's good...

Update soon...

wow. thanks for the explainations at the top so I know not to pester you. :) I liked it and the dark fey sounds very interesting. :) can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Aw, he's such a cute incubus _ He and Rowan would make a good couple :P I like the flashbacks mixed in...it made it very interesting :D

please let Rowan accept Adra!