Is this a third person point of view on yourself or someone else? The only reason I ask is after reading your other poems. That's all. It was a really nice poem though. Did you write all of these poems in this one night? I am just curious...I know I have my inspirational days...Today not being one of them...I think I was too heart broken or numb. When I am numb I can't describe well. But I do write...Good job.