|Reviews for My Guardian Angel|
| miss-hyperactive 5/18/07 . chapter 1
Christable is the worst person in the world!
This is now one of my favorites. So...perfect.
| trix-a-belle 5/18/07 . chapter 1
words cannot describe how sad that really was!
it was just so...i don't know.
it was beautiful it really was and what was very strange was that i was listening to The Memory Will Never Die by Default as i was reading (ironic or what?)
that was really great.
| Little Silver Kitten 5/18/07 . chapter 1
what? what? what? that's the end? Such a sad ending... *sniffs*...I just enjoyed reading it...it's just so bittersweet...love your oneshots!
| Tecna 5/18/07 . chapter 1
Why are you people writing tragic ending fics? I mean it's not fair! I am having my final exams -for a month- and instead of reading happy fics, I'm reading sad ones!
But nonetheless, it is brilliant! I truly enjoyed it, it's amazing! Will you write a sequel to this? PLEASE?
(With a cherry on the top?) Ahem!
Well anyway! Awesome fic.
I won't be around for 2-3 weeks after this, really busy!
Catcha on the download.
| candii-apple 5/18/07 . chapter 1
NO! *bursts into tears* sad ending! no! it was realli realli realli good tho! [except 4 da fact that i hate sad endings ]
| BeautyIsn'tSkinDeep 5/18/07 . chapter 1
OMG! that was so cute! i wanted them to get together again :(
ah well - it was still very very good :D
| angels and effects 5/18/07 . chapter 1
Oh my God, you flipping genius! I LOVE YOUR ONE SHOTS! And this is so sad! Seriously, I wanted to cry when Alex had been struck on the head by Autumn's dad and all she could do was look at the blood, blah, I'm not so good at summarising. There's also the bitter irony that it was Autumn's fault that Alex can't remember her any more. I love the plot, everything... personally, I feel the sub-category should include Angst too because there's quite an amount of it here. If not, it wouldn't make me want to cry. You have a knack of being able to mix humour and angst together without making it seem overdone, which is what makes it unique. :)
I love the ending too - it leaves behind a sufficient number of questions marks, yet gives readers a sort of hope that Alex will be able to recover. I would have loved an ending where Alex gains his memory back and remembers Autumn, but the last sentence was good enough. Christabel's just a jealous best friend, but it was a great idea to bring her in. Of course, I'm willing to bet that in the end, Alex does recover from his amnesia... it's a little hard to think otherwise.
As for criticism... nothing much, this is too perfect for words! Except maybe that you occasionally switch tenses. The entire story is obviously in past tense but sometimes, it veers off to the present tense (not too badly, but it's still prevalent enough to damage the flow of the story). For example, 'She’s fallen for Alex.' should be 'She'd fallen for Alex'. By the way, are you Australian or British? I noticed that you use UK English (I do too) and I was just curious. Or maybe I asked you that before and forgot. :)
So, update Brown Eyes soon and I'll be an even happier reader!
P.S. Your characterisation of Autumn was good. She's the kind of person I would like to meet in real life, you know? And once again, poor Alex... love truly knows no boundaries.
| s-pecial-lee me 5/18/07 . chapter 1
aw! so sweet until the end. i don't like the end. they needa end up together! they r so meant to be!
| eRIN 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Oh it's so sweet. Too bad it's a one-shot thingy. I love it.
| YoursMarilyn 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, that was a really good oneshot! I love your writing, please update when you get the chance. :)
| Ruh 5/17/07 . chapter 1
oh my god...this story almost brought me to tears...very very well writeen...maybe you could write lke a sequel/epilogue or something with a good ending
| Twinkle Star Bell 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh. That's so sad. I almost wanted to cry. He forgot her and that Cristabell made it worse! How could she do that. She just wants Alex. It's so sad it's a one-shot. I hope there be like a sequel one-shot or something but highly unlikely. lol. Anyway update soon this story was really good! Well written and well thought out.
| swimchickslam 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Aww! OMG that was so sad D: Christabel's a bitch [ I love your oneshots :)
| JaimeG 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Omg... that's so sad... i cried.. it's horrible... i think you should write it into a full size story... i would definately read it
| Venus Smurf1 5/17/07 . chapter 1
Wow. Just...WOW. That had to be one of the most powerful pieces I've ever read. I'm awed, I'm amazed, I'm...pissed. What's with that ending? Don't you know that they're supposed to end up together?
Well, you're wonderful, and it's definitely an ending I won't forget...okay, I still adore you. I'd love it if you'd write a sequel, but I'm grateful for this whatever happens. You're just plain gifted, you know.