aww, this had a really sad ending...but i'll just pretend that they get together again.

it was really cute though, and i think her friend chrissy is a horrible friend, if you can even call her a friend.

but the story was awesome, keep up the good work!

That was a poignant sad love story. I feel sorry for Autumn and the pain it caused her. Christabel is a cruel person, what kind of best friend would push the girlfriend away.

I liked the ending put forth, it gives the reader to end the story which is probably they would meet again and fall in love back all over again and this time fate would not hinder it. :)

Nicely written for a chapter length. It's worth reading it.

believe it or not, I actaully LOVED the ending. it might've ended...well...not happily, but it was still great! good job!

bec

wow. that was really good. uber sweet and that made the ending so friggin sad. i thought for sure that he would remember autumn because they spent so much time tigether. i really wish he'd remember. :( and you have awesome writing skills

I didn't like the ending too much.

aww that was such a bittersweet story! It would have been awesome if Alex had remembered Autumn... but I love how you left the end to the reader's imagination :]

cute. ) The ending was great. Got some deja vu going on, huh? Awesome work! Hope to read more of your stories!

you should make a sequal...

since the dr. said it was TEMPORARY.

stupid christabel.

if she was really autumn's friend then she would have been said for a while then gotten over it.

no matter how long she loved alex.

it is not that stupid girl's place to stop autumn and alex from loving eachother.

sorry, it makes me angry.

:/

but make a sequal.

please.

toodles,

midnight.

This story kinda reminded me of the song Your Guardian Angel by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus. Anyway, I liked the story.

arghh this story was good but why did you end it like that? The ending sucks! especially with the story saying "everything works out"... "Fate"... blah blah blah, lol. you ned to extend this to him remembering her! pleasee?

That was adorable, and the ending, I must say that I loved it. It was bittersweet, pure and perfect and bitter, but it leaves so much more to be desired.

And truthfully, I like the fact that you leave several loose ends untied, because it leaves the reader with something to think about, and I rarely find authors who do this, so congratulations on that.

Overall, you did a great job on the vignette, and I'm off to read more of your works.

- h.b.h.