This was great! I love how you ended it just like that; those words have so much meaning in the story you know?

I haven't seen any mistakes in tense, or perhaps I was way too wrapped up in the story to notice any! This is going in my favorites (:

I really liked this story and I didn't notice any tense mistakes. It'd be nice if you made a sequel or something like that for this story.

I want to hear more! This is possibly my fave oneshot right now. It's so twisted, yet so so so so sweet. I loves!

-dANI g.

This was cute in a dramatic, angsty way ^_^ I liked it.

Those types of hospitals make me so sad. You usually find the most beautiful people there.

*loves*
Your writing made me see it movie style the whole time, so now i feel like youd o after the movies. All un-real and everything real seems plastic becasue the story was more real, but not.
*laughs*
dude, this was awesome.

Your author's note makes me want the rest of the story too, but I'm greedy, especially for your writing. I love this line, "his shoulder blades stabbing at the air behind him like jagged, broken remains of wings." I'm really happy that in the end Skeleton was eating - yay! - he wants to be with Sunny too.

aw. this was cute. yea. lovers.

Oh man, golly gee wiz, I sure did enjoy this story, and I have to go take a shower kay love you bye and Matt just signed off so i don't have to tell you so when you read this you'll know why I stopped answering you kthx bai

Lovely! Great imagery, I love the way Sunny's mind works, he's so imaginative.

I liked this story. It was very good and had a great meaning! YAY! I have to say that Sunny's mom is like a general mom of the world, not wanting to know, not caring to know. I liked it! Always! Kiwi

aw this was cute and sweet and sad all at the same time. i almost wish it were a bit longer but it's perfect as it is :)

It was good. I liked the point of view, and the way you got an understanding of the character without a lot of help. Kinda freaky love story, bit I enjoyed it.

That was SO good! I loved it!

Aw can't you make a sequel? I like these boys!