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| Catseye*Rose 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was cute in a dramatic, angsty way ^_^ I liked it. |
| Let. Me. Fly. 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThose types of hospitals make me so sad. You usually find the most beautiful people there. |
| Sychaeus 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuse*loves* Your writing made me see it movie style the whole time, so now i feel like youd o after the movies. All un-real and everything real seems plastic becasue the story was more real, but not. *laughs* dude, this was awesome. |
| nonaccount 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseYour author's note makes me want the rest of the story too, but I'm greedy, especially for your writing. I love this line, "his shoulder blades stabbing at the air behind him like jagged, broken remains of wings." I'm really happy that in the end Skeleton was eating - yay! - he wants to be with Sunny too. |
| Emmy 2007-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw. this was cute. yea. lovers. |
| rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr... 2007-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh man, golly gee wiz, I sure did enjoy this story, and I have to go take a shower kay love you bye and Matt just signed off so i don't have to tell you so when you read this you'll know why I stopped answering you kthx bai |
| yohoho and a bottle of bum ... 2007-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely! Great imagery, I love the way Sunny's mind works, he's so imaginative. |
| A Confused Kiwi 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story. It was very good and had a great meaning! YAY! I have to say that Sunny's mom is like a general mom of the world, not wanting to know, not caring to know. I liked it! Always! Kiwi |
| lilylupin7 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseaw this was cute and sweet and sad all at the same time. i almost wish it were a bit longer but it's perfect as it is :) |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseIt was good. I liked the point of view, and the way you got an understanding of the character without a lot of help. Kinda freaky love story, bit I enjoyed it. |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO good! I loved it! |
| Esquirella 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAw can't you make a sequel? I like these boys! |
| Sargon 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL they are SO cute! lol I heart sunny but um skeleton was a bit...scary LOL but still cute...but not hot hahahaha I might write a one shot MM now you've inspired me LOL maybe not hahaha can't be bothered |
| super happy nuclear girl 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseoh my god, oh my godd! Lain you god, you. I love, love, love this so, so much. I love your words, how you describe him as a pirate, his clacking jaw, everything! Its PERFECT and Skeleton makes me want to hug him better. And Sunny is wonderful too. !! I love the 'hi, hello' thing at the end. It sounds it off nicely, wonderfully. I think its perfect, hands down, stuff. You know? your descriptions made me shudder. faving it! x |
| Fork-In-Your-Eye 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so very different from the other normal cliche stories. It makes me laugh!^^ This was what i was saying at the end,"... ... the hell..." It's like so random... Who wants to go back to some mental institute, or whatever it is, just because he wants to meet a guy. Wow... I love the name calling, it is like a little kiddie calling people whom they don't know. HAHA... I can't believe he called whatever his name Skeleton straight into his face. LOL! This story reminds me of a show/drama, Skins. Where Cassy/Cassandra had to go to the institute because she is aneroxic. She packs the kitchen food in very neat order when she is hungry. HAHA! At the institute, there are soo many people who are mentally disturbed with different funny kinds of problems. HILARIOUS... haha^^ Thanks for the story^^ haha^^ |