I adored this. The repetition, the flow, just everything. It is truly amazing. I applaud you. Great job.

I really, really liked this. I wish I could say something profound about this piece, but alas, words fail me. The repetition was put in all the right places, and ... this was generally just impressive. The ninth stanza reminds me of a quote from Queen Elizabeth I of England, who said, "Your judgement I condemn not, neither do I mistake your reasons, but pray you to accept my thankfulness, excuse my doubtfulness, and take in good part my answer, answerless."