Reviews for The Eternal and Unspeakable Sleeper

don juan banana 2007-05-20 ch 1,	abusedis is unrealistx wud never happen disgusts me
vainXfantasy 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseO.O wow! LOVED IT! awsome story. Very descrptive. I like how u started it with the word crimson. A very good plot. I like how u ended it.
AluminumMuse 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, over all, I really like it. The ending could be a little better, in that it could leave us wondering if it was infact real or not. I like the symptoms of the illness, they remind me other the white sickness in The Naming and The Riddle(sequal). Some grammatical errors, you could easily locate those with some editing. I think this would be more powerful if you employed a moer 1920's-30's american style, that is to say, fewer advective and adjerbs, instead lots of strong verbs and nouns. You say 'poor' too much. Blah blah blah. On non-grammar and mechanics bases, you are doing well! -Feather