I like this a lot.. how you start by saying its cliche and italicize the cliche parts.. although I might've italicized happy ending also.. but thats just me.. I can definately relate to this piece

Very e.e. esque, which is a high compliment I assure you. This takes the everyday, and the typical phrasery, and turns it on its ear. The concept is marvelous. The execution is marvelous. Very well written.