hey, this is a cool chapter. I think it has a lot of great detail

I liked this chapter, especially the part about the consistency of human nature. And I enjoyed Cecil's job hunt.

I enjoy the cliffhangers in this story and the pop culture references. You're doing a great job; keep writing

Wow, this is amazing! You are a very talented writer and the plot is great! Ironically enough, my birthday is on July 7th.

Wow! Very good! I just read the whole thing in one go. Very well done, you certainly have talent! I really like the story so far. Please do write more soon. I want to know what happens to Cecil.

I like how this is beginning. And the reference to Vonnegut was nice and subtle. I'm interested to see how it turns out. Keep writing.