i didnt realise i hadnt put in a review on this but anyway
excellent i love it

Wow - very dark and pessimistic. I really like it. The prose is so strict and hard, with short sentences and short paragraphs, and it builds the feeling of hopelessness. In the beginning I felt there was a chance a hero should come and make things right, but at the end nothing was left. Yet I felt good for having been given a good piece of writing to read. "They lied." - Great ending. Well, I don't really have any critique. :)

Very interesting, Mars.