I cried. A lot.
Mostly because the boy I unfortunately have an unbreakable connection with is joining the army after highschool, & this is the thought that terrifies me. Honestly, it's a phenomenal story.

Hopefully it won't be a prediction of my future.

I'm tearing up. That was beautiful, so beautiful and so sad. We talk about mothers and wives and children, no one really ever explores gay couples in those times, in those situations, and...

I'm just going to cry for a while...

Thankyou

yay for gay love =D but sadness for .. sad things? lol. but i love it anyway. very nice (:

I really like this story. Thumbs up, for you!!

Oh. Ouch. Oh lord, that was a beautiful story. The voice is so heartfelt, so simple. I don't know what to say, can't think of any critique or suggestion. It's simply beautiful.

That was very beautiful. Sad...but beautiful. I am speechless... Well done.

~Hallas

Very powerful piece.

That was really sad and emotional but I really liked it. It felt easy for me to really put my heart into the character's story. Probably because it dealt with losing someone in war, which is something a lot of us can identify with nowadays. But I really liked the 1st person POV and the diary/journal entry type feel of it. Tragic and Romantic. Great Job!