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| tsubaki-dono 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseJohnny made an interesting character right off, talking to himself (or the elevator; does it count?) just drew me in to his train of thought-processing. The double-entendre in that first conversation with Adam pulled a grin right out onto my face. Easy interaction, humour established right off really set the mood for the rest of this fic. The instant attraction was rather too easy but still exciting. The setting up of the date: the intrusion of real life changes and things not going as smoothly as they originally seemed was a good touch; something as simple as a schedule change. Johnny stuck to his work and that showed me his ethics, his character. Made me like him all the more. Adam was cute but you didn’t show us too deeply into him, though accepting the change in plan scored him some points. And then some more innuendo at the elevators all over again! And the teasing was great all the way to the end. Great work! Now here’s me off to your profile to see what else you’ve written… |
| XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was just great and the wordplay was amazing. All the sexual innuendos too. I loved it. I hope I spelled that right lol. Anyways, I loved it and I will be reading more from you. Wow. I'm gonna read this again tomorrow lol. Bye For Now |
| Dark Emo Shadow 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuselol hahaha i like i like i like! hehe! yay, is there actually a major for Gay Studies? that would be so cool! |
| Esquirella 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED THIS! |
| Sinister Slash 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI will never be able to go into a library with thinking about this again ^_^. I'll look around in all the back rooms, hehe. i loved this story, very sweet, Sexy, and funny. |