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AmarieC 2007-06-11 . chapter 1
True... people should worry more about what their insides are like, not outside.
half-sketched.staccatos 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
konichiwa

Another wonderful piece. =) How do you just spit these out so easily?

I hate this almost as much as I hate discrimination: When you're little, everyone teaches you it's what's inside that counts and all that. Then, you grow up. If you even DARE to utter the words, "It's what's inside that counts," people would probably almost die laughing. They'd say that it's naive or whatever else they can think of.

Well, I'm sorry, but it wouldn't be so naive and unbelievable if people all held by that. There wouldn't be as much Anorexia (if any) if people would actually realize that it's true and not just some stupid saying you tell a five-year-old.

People think everything's wrong with them and all that crap, but what do they think? It's not like God screwed up or something when He created someone. He didn't accidentally make a person too fat. He WANTED it to be like that! We all have what we need to do what we should be doing in life. We don't all need to be so skinny that everyone can see our ribcages or have a certain color hair in a certain hairstyle that costs a certain amount of money.

You should put all this into a book and publish it. Not just this one, of course, but all of the stuff you've written (at least from what I've read, that's the impression I get).

Ki o tsukete nee, tomodachi
-Shan-
Ashelin 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
Have you ever read the book "Uglies"? It is a wonderful book, and it really made me think about how really the fact that not everyone is "beautiful" makes everyone that more attractive and amazing. I liked this and think it is totally true. Great job!
Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
Hey!


Some of you are not going to read this because it is either something you don't want ot read or you already know... so it is like bla bla bla ... bla ... bla... I know the feeling, but you know I read a lot about teens wanting to kill themselves and bad stuff... so I wanted to write something postive for a change. I mean I wrote some dark stuff too, but I like it sometimes... Edgar Allan Poe... he rocks!


With Much Love,

Tiffany Pradeep
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