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| fatbird33 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseO the ANGER! i could totally feel it. |
| Bump 2007-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes. It would be interesting wouldn't it? Well, tell them to write their version of it, then. I SO want to read it... |
| ShadowFane 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThis wasn't...too bad...Ok, I didn't like it at all. It lacked flow, and it was too short. Nice try, though. If I were you, I'd try again. SF |
| No One Needs to Know 2007-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove the one word concept. Could be a little longer. Over-all, not too bad...Could be a lot better, but not bad. |