;_; That was beautiful but very sad! I think you have great talent. Seriously! This poem is great. But...I hope your next poems won't be so sad.

I really like your diction in the second phrase of each line. They're simple statements, but they say so much.

I'm not really one for repetition though. So I didn't particularly like that aspect of your poem. ^^;; But then again, that's just my personal preference.

But I really like the contrast you have between the first phrases and the second phrases in stanza one, two, and three. Great comparisons. =D

It's such a sad poem, Hojo-chan! T_T

Not bad! There is no repetative rhythem that can get old fast, just a straight set. Nice job.

Stop acting so emo!

You are beautiful; others do think so
You are intelligent; past grades don't matter
You are loyal; You show loyalty to me
You are empathetic; I know how we all feel

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and very nice, calm poem, seems like one that would appear in a book of poems

I like it! But it's kinda... dark. >_> No suicide, please, Hojo-san?? ;-;