very nice ^^ ive never been too poetic... so i am very happy to know that someone i know is good at it ^^

i saw stardust recently and this reminded me of that, and how the stars see all of our history. Again, really brilliant :)

Brilliant, really!! Very eloquent, i enjoyed reading it :)

very pretty, i would just put it into stanzas to give it a little more structure and make it easier to read. other than that, good job!

It sounds like you're looking for a deity, hmm? This poem is alright. I do not like your use of capital letters; they're gratuitous. The image of stars as watching people is in there, but there isn't much of a basis for them holding knowledge etc...mayhap I expected it to be more logical. This poem is nice in that it expresses a feeling of "everything that goes on history [or daily life] that we don’t know about", like there are missing facets. Not bad.

Interesting. The metaphors are clear. "Pupeteer" has such a negative connotation for me, and yet the tone of this poem is positive...or neutral. Hmm. Good job, with pretty good rhythm.

ok that one was kind of interesting it definitely made me think especially after i read your a/n cant wait for more!

hey just so you know i just made a ficpress acoount so i could review your stuff this was all for you lol that was really good i liked it you're really talented when it comes to poems i cant wait to see how your stories come out!