Oh, oh, oh, I know! The twins were the bread? Maybe? Am I insane? I love your stories.

oh snap! It was funny!

That was AWESOME! I'm thinking there was going to be some strange thing at the end but that was stinking great! Thanks for sharing that.

oh oh... the twins are the bread! he he... im just another person in this world questioning their sanity =)

Haha! I really like this.

xD Tanned all over... purple and red. xD I'm guessing the twins are bread? Best friends... butter? I'm not sure. I haven't actually had a peanut butter & jelly sandwich before, but that's irrelevant. I'm a fast reader, though, and I saw the 'jelly' part, and then 'sanity is overrated', and I sort of guessed. Love it. I burst out laughing; my parents think I'm going slightly crazy... ^^

x.akeyana

Whoa... Didn't see that one coming. Great personification. I love it. It is really so funny. A great surprise. Keep up the work!

AHAHAHAHA wow. Yeah, you got me. LOVED this; you're really awesome with personification. I honestly, genuinely, sincerely LOVE your style and the way your mind works. It's awesomely unique, refreshing, and cute. Never really been a fan of peanut butter and jelly (aside from those Uncrustables xD), but this might make me change my mind. KEEP WRITING!

;)becky

Okay, something is seriously wrong with me tonight; everything is making me teary eyed. Its getting kind of annoying actually.

Anyway, another great fic. Very sweet. It's short but you did it justice. A good read. The ending was a pleasant surprise and a good finish.

Keep up the good work,
Zell.

Haha! loved it! never would have guessed the ending and laughed so hard when I saw it! and you're right: sanity is overrated.

that was genious!

lol, that was great, i really didn't see it coming. you really have a flare for interesting stories.

Hahahahaha. Oh man. You totally got me. Once I'd read the "Sanity is overrated" suggestion, out of my peripheral vision, I noticed the two bold words in the last line. I'm a fast reader, and a lot of times when I'm reading on FP, I have a tendency to skip down and read something when it stands out, but I resisted! So yes, when I got to the bottom, I was very surprised, but then when I reread their descriptions, I though, 'Now how did I not get that?' It was very well done. The twins are bread, of course! Not that this matters, er, at all, but you said they dated each other's best friends--who are their best friends? Is jelly's best friend butter? My mom always has toast with jelly and butter. And peanut butter...bananas, maybe? I feel kind of bad now, because I hate jelly and only have peanut butter sandwiches--my apologies to the happy couple.

The twins are BREAD!
YESS!
I own3d that one!

Nice, I like the twist at the end, you got some terrintino crap going on here. No, but seriously, really cute. I kept imagining some freaky looking guy and a girl with wierd hair, but i would never guess they were a SANDWHICH!

I liked it alot, it got me kind of excited.

Keep up the excellent work!

M a r k ~~

Ha, Ha, Ha! Peanut Butter and Jelly? It is surprising, actually. Good job!