Me confused.

A real jazzy chapter, eh? I love how charsmatic and sauvy Jai is. Its entertaining as hell and you geniuely love him for it. My only complaint is the 'people have left you before' observation of Art, warning herself not to get too close. Plz spare me the psycholoical reasonings for her 'distance' and the time when she must confornt her past and let Jai in blah, blah , blah...

i got so confused :(
I love i though
MORE =D

More... I got so confused on this chapter. I mean like seriously confused. But I realised she was going to IT..

so so so lost.

I'm really enjoying this. I love Artemis ^^ Hope she ends up with Jai (pretty sure that's what'll happen, because Will is a jerk and Jai is far more awesome XD). It's fun reading about all the stereotypes (there's a message!)...plus I love your description of the outfits. They're basically all the things I love to wear XD I really want to know what the heck was going on in the last chapter O_O Why were they all freaking out? I don't get it! But I guess everything will be revealed later... Looking forward to it! XD

dude i really like this story alot and wat is she missing confuseded much lol

ohkay that last part was a little confusing
but otherwise the chapter was good
yay for glowsticks!!
haha can't wait for more

izzie

the rogue dances
rawr - impressive
and the prince...?
right
him.
i don't care much for him
my personal bias is coming into it haha
loved the chapter
and YAY RAVE!! haha
personally never been to one, but with that bunch
it's sure to be hilariously fun

izzie

Gaddamn you Nach! I want to read more, otherwise I'LL start making up the rest of the story!

More more more more more more!!

Dani

I feel embarrassed for her! I swear, she is one screwed up woman lol... except i'd be like her as well, Hot goth guy, Hot guy with abs and looking like a shaggy dog lol.

Dani

Kent just had to say the most grossest thing. My god nach... to many gay men around you in one sitting haha.

Dani xx

I love the main character, she's so kool

Will sounds like a mother-fucking Abericambie model, so clihe.
Love the characters so far, and that the name of the main charater Arty Artemis simply brillant. She's witty too

Thank goodness, someone needed to point out to Arty that she was being (insert curse words here). I was so close to strangling her in my mind...

Love this story. Love, love, love it.

(Watch out for punctation!)