wow! I liked it. It held a good moral... but lets face it, at times it was crepy! =)
An excellent mix of thriller and spiritual workmanship.

Very nice story. The theme of the story is awesome, and it's portrayed very nicely. It really shows what true Christians are. Christians aren't people who go to church every day or memorize the entire Bible because they feel they have to because God wouldn't love them. They're people who love God and know that He will always love them, and never leave them. It's good to go to church and memorize the Bible, but if you're not acting on the things you learn through church or the Bible, there's no point in doing either of them. Again, very nice job.

I think that this was very true and wise. It isn't about going to church or memorizing the verses (though those are important parts) it is realizing Jesus is your Savior and loving Him, wanting your life to be right for Him. This had a good moral, and I think it helps define true Christians apart from the fanatics. Great job.