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| rawrrmonkey 2008-08-07 ch 26, | abuseI love this. Oh my goodness, it's written so well. I've never read anything like this and I love it :DD You, Ice Tea Junkie, is gifted :) |
| telepop 2008-03-16 ch 26, | abuseThat was really good. Nah... that's not giving you enough credit, that was SUPER TANFABULOUSLY WICKED and AWESOME. The chapters were short and sweet, a little on each character and even though the world is a big place, they were reunited in a weird-too much of a coincidence kind of way. But none the less it was great. I especially liked reading Charley's story. It was a bittersweet ending, I think. I mean people die and shit happens but you can't let that stop you from living, and it just gave me hope in a small way. I really enjoyed this story from the title to the very end. :) |
| telepop 2008-03-15 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good. |
| Sveedish Chef 2008-01-06 ch 26, | abuseHow absolutely amazingly beautiful! I am in awe - this is quite an achievement. There were so many interconnections in this piece, and everything was so deep. It really made me think about it. In fact, I believe this is something you can't just read with your eyes, that would be impossible. It's incomprehensible without thinking for a while. This is just genius. The endings were all so well done too! Wow! |
| soojinyeh 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThis story is a semifinalist for Story of the Year. Please go to my forums for more info. |
| tree of life and shadow 2007-11-11 ch 26, | abusewow... that was... amazing. it really was. if you published it, i would buy it. |
| Jack Argyle 2007-10-16 ch 26, | abuseFour perspectives and I enjoyed every one of them. At first it was just writing on my computer screen, but the characters you created and the way they evolved just absolutley drew me in. Yes, I know that sounds cheesey but it's the honest truth. I'm glad I was able to read the whole thing instead of having to wait for updates; you definately get the most out of the story if you read it in one sitting. Charley and Diana were great. They all were really, but C and D's interlinking storylines just had me engrossed. In conclusion...wow. I was going to finish off my current story tonight but I don't think I'm in the correct mood for comedy now. Not many stories can do that to me so thanks for the experience and congratulations on writing a great story. I'm all done now. |
| oOo The Skittle Queen oOo 2007-09-04 ch 26, | abuseI can't believe you finished it! Now what am I going to read?! THIS WAS FANTASTIC! The first original story I came across and actually liked! Oh hell I'm going to pick up some more of your other stories! That was he best ending and definitly the highest rated by me- a minimum 12 out of 10! I'll have to make mum read this now, and my sister. It all just knitted together so unbelieveably well!! Kudos kudos kudos kudos kudos! -Rose. |
| 14-10-2004 2007-09-04 ch 26, | abuseYay! Happy ending! :D |
| WickedElfy 2007-08-19 ch 22, | abuseHi. This is an interesting story, but some things in the beginning are a bit confusifying. Is the break-up of characters really needed? Good luck. P.S. This is lotrelves from fanfictiondotnet. |
| Paige 2007-08-17 ch 21, anon. | abuseWe'll all never be happy, will we? |
| fantasywriter22 2007-08-13 ch 7, | abuseHm, guess that Diana's mother is Charlie's girlfriend who died? Probably not...but who knows. Still loving it. |
| fantasywriter22 2007-08-13 ch 3, | abuse:) You have a real knack for showing who each character is. Loving it and reading on. |
| fantasywriter22 2007-08-13 ch 2, | abuseStill really good. I loves it. Reading on. |
| fantasywriter22 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far. The only thing I don't understand is who called Charlie a freak and bastard? Was it his parents or friends? That's the only thing. Besides that. I really like it so far. You've introduced the characters well. I'm interested in finding out what happens next. Reading on. |